2011年6月英语四级考试真题详细解析Part I Writing标准版Doing Shopping OnlineWith the development of the Internet,shopping is no longer a tiring thing.Just click yourmouse to choose the articles you like,and the purchase is done.You don't even have to step outof the room.It seems all easy and quick.However,people's opinions vary on this trend.Some believe that on line shopping is timeand money saving.With plentiful selection options,they can buy whatever they like at any timeconvenient.Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough,not to mention thecredibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts.In my opinion,the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts.Inthe meantime,we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist,so we'd better make surethe sellers are trustworthy before buying.In addition,we should also guard ourselves from thepotential hackers who might steal our account information.文章点评：这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇：接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比：最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。但是，以“With the development of the Internet'”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options..简化成With plentiful selections..更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多。高分版With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology,online shopping iscoming into fashion in most of cities.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspectiveof consumer,it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time.Just click themouse,they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers,it can cut somecosts for those who don't have much circulating funds.They don't have to rent a house and spendmoney on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However,there are still somedefects in online shopping.First,lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliableand trustworthy.Second,people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modemsociety.It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapidgrowth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience ofonline shopping without the concern of being treated.点评：本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一一互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题：第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点：关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间：网购可以节省很多成本开支等：其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面：为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣：第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会他是难题。外教版Online shopping has been a boon tochores and for the fathers who work amany industries and companies looking tofull-time job.On the other hand,there areexpand their markets.Also,it's convenientlimits to shopping online,for example:for shoppers who are too busy to leave theguessing the correct size of clothing on ahouse.However,in some cases nothing cancomputer screen can be very frustrating.replace a true face to face shoppingFor the busy mother and father,onlineexpenence.shopping is a very useful and convenient tool.Internet shopping is convenient for theBut,there are instances,like clothes shopping,mothers who spend all day doing housewhere nothing beats the real thing.点评：作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利，然后话锋一转，说网购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足，以此描述大家对网购的不同反应。第三段作者表明了自己的观点，对网购的便利和不足之处都做了描述。综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，结构清晰，语言表达地道，有不少闪光词汇，但是，内容深度上来讲还有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表达个人观点，和第二段稍有重复。考生需要注意观点的清晰，不宜模棱两可。Part II Reading Comprehension (Skimming and Scanning)1.B.Its bad taste解析：题干中generally known for对应原文a reputation for,根据原文第一句Why doesBritish food have a reputation for being so bad?Because it is bad!可知关键词为bad,故选B。2.A.an inadequate supply of production解析：由题干关键词the Second World War可以定位到原文第四段，二战之前，英国的食品都是进口的，二战之后，食品供应船只遭到攻击，只能依靠配给。故选A,食品供给不足3.B.Its people cared more for quantity解析：由compete with some of its neighbouring countries可以定位到原文第6段，theyweren't looking for...,they were looking for...,this prioritization of quantity over qualityprevailed for decades.可见他们对数量的追求高于质量，因此选B。4.C.all kinds of overseas visitors解析：由题干关键词culinary定位到原文第7段，根据最后一句..its ability to please thetastes of any international visitor..而any international visitor就等同于答案all kinds ofoverseas visitors。故选C.5.C.New ideas and presentations2解析：问题是按照David Tamlyn的观点，香港的饮食者喜欢什么.先根据David Tamlyn这个人名定位到原文第八段，再根据最后一句话Hong Kong diners are extremely responsiveto new ideas or presentations,..这里的are extremely responsive to在意思上等于题千中的welcome6.D.maintain British traditional tastes解析：一些饭店修改菜谱，采用新样式，而另外一些则保留英式口味，再根据Tamlynis in the second camp,可知Tamlyn属于后者，即保留原汁原味。故答案选D。7.B.They are produced on excellent organic farms解析：由Neil Tomes定位到原文第l2段，根据最后两句话.It has excellent organic farms,.beautifully crafted cheeses,,high-quality meats可选出答案B,Neil Tomes喜欢英国原料的原因就在于原料产于优秀的有机农场。8.the local markets解析：根据原文，.which means we take our vegetables from the local markets,.即除了从英国直接进口，还有部分蔬菜从本地市场购买的。解析：先定位到The Phoenix那一段，再找到下一段，We use a lot of ingredients thatpeople wouldn't perhaps associate as British,but are presented in a British way.10.share their mealsAt Yorkshire Pudding,Hill says that his staff asks diners whether they would like toshare their meals.餐厅之所以在上菜之后再供应碟子，原因就在于可能会有人愿意和别人分享食物。Part III Listening ComprehensionSection A11.M:Shawn's been trying for months to find a job.But I wonder how he could get a job whenhe looks like that.W:Oh,that poor guy!He really should shave himself every other day at least and put onsomething clean.Q:What do we leam about Shawn?答案：A.He is careless about his appearance.解析：男生首先对肖恩能否找到工作表示怀疑，因为他邋通。女生接着提到肖恩不修边幅，又说他应该每隔一天刮一次胡子，把自己弄得整洁干净一点。由此可知，肖恩是一个对仪容仪表不太注重，比较粗线条的人shave,刮胡子：be careless about不在乎，不介意：12.W:I wish Jane would call when she know she'll be late.This is not the first time we've hadto wait for her.M:I agree.But she does have to drive through very heavy traffic to get here.Q:What does the man imply?答案：A.Jane maybe caught in a traffic jam.解析：本题是推理题，在做题时要注意仔细推敲。女生说：“Jae己经不是第一次迟到让我们等了，我希望她能事先打电话告诉我们一下”，可见女生对Jae迟到的作法是不满的。男生又说："I agree.But she does have to drive through very heavy traffic to get here.”(我同意。但是她到这里的确要遭受很拥堵的交通。)由此得出，男生对此事的态度是理解或宽容的。Jane可能被堵在半路了。13.M:Congratulations!I heard your baseball team is going to the Middle Atlantic3